after i sharing a draft of my book 'when i close my eyes...' to my good little mate sarah she told me that next i will have to write a story called 'when i open my eyes...' well, this isn't quite a story sarah i think it might be more of a poem. but thanks for the suggestion. i wrote this remembering what it was like waking up as a little kid. my childhood memories have never been stronger since having children of my own...he he, children. i'm just getting used to the plural! xx
so i guess this grown up photo might not be quite fitting but i just love it. x
when i open my eyes...
so i guess this grown up photo might not be quite fitting but i just love it. x
when i open my eyes...
i blink at the light and wait for my eyes to catch up with the rest of the world
my throat is dry,
i drink my bedside water
and it tastes like a river.
when i open my eyes...
the smell of toast
and the sound of dad’s radio station
reach my bedroom;
it’s the home part of house.
when i open my eyes...
i roll over and day dream
i have a thought...
today is the first today
there has never been one before.
rachel xx
rachel xx
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